INTRUDER!!!!!!!!!!!

[~*|Dream♥Star|*~]

"This is a perfect territory for RavenClan."A scraggy, blood thirsty voice purred.
Her yellow eyes burned from the dark as she jumped out, onto a mice. Cancergaze's ragged claws sliced it in half easily as her smile curved crooked. Her matted fur and bent tail stood up as she sniffed the air hungrily for something else to kill. Her terrible stench filled the air, what the clans called the stench of RavenClan. She wanted to find Lord Nyroc somehow. She knew something big was going to happen, and soon.

[~*Scar_The_Broken*~]

A massive black form moved into Nightclan territory. Long bone like talons scraping te earth. His reek stretched before him like a cloud of death.

[~*|Dream♥Star|*~]

( have 2 have at least 10 sentences, sorry )

Her crisp yellow eyes looked up and her crooked smile grew.
"Hello Talonstar."The deputy purred roughly before giving her ragged fur a few licks."What brings you out on this moonless night? I've been having some very bad feelings, like I usually do when something is about to go wrong. Someting terribly wrong."Her smile turned into a puzzled frown and her eyes glinted no more.
She seemed a bit worried. At the same time scared and fearful.
"Something is going to come into the forest, something RavenClan can't stop."

[~*Scar_The_Broken*~]

Talonstar's light gray eyes narrowed and he neared his deputy. "I smell your fear Cancergaze... pathetic!" The massive tom reared back and sank his long curved talons into the bark of a tall tree. Ripping downward with a vicousness that was all his own. "We can do anything! Or do you deny the might of Nyroc our lord?" He growled to hsi deputy leaving long slashes deep in the tree's wood.

[~*|Dream♥Star|*~]

Cancergaze almost flenched from the terrible screeching noise against the tree.
"Of course I do not fear him."Although she knew the tale, and Nyroc vowed to destroy ALL the clans."What makes you think that? I was uh talking about the twolegs. You know Lord Nyroc can't touch a twoleg. Heck, the only cat dumb enough to stand up to him was that Silverlight she cat from Shadowclan. Now she's gon isn't she? And Nyroc lives on. But I have a bad feeling trouble is on it's way, and I think it has to do with the legend, before the eclipse, of Nyroc's lips, this curse leg to flight, will be rebirthed as Silverlight."

[goldendragon]

Goldendragon spied a squirrel in the undergrowth in the clearing beyond her. She slowly creeped towards the sweet-smelling ginger animal, and then halted in her tracks. The squirrel must have smelled the reek as well, because it scurried up the side of a large oak tree close to it. She cussed under her breath that she had lost her fresh-kill. She lifted her nose into the air, the only thing she smelled was the reek of RavenClan, but why would they be in her territory. She narrowed her eyes and stepped forward, shouting, "Reveal yourself, and by the way why are you in my territory! LEAVE NOW!" She flicked her tail hoping for the smell to leave and top irritating her nosrtils, but it didn't. She stepped forward and repeated, "Leave now, Raven Clan fox-dung! This is Night Clan territory!"

[~*|Dream♥Star|*~]

Cancergaze's evil expression came back and she looked through the shrubs next to them. This would be fun. And good practice. This, would be Goldendragon's end.
"What makes you think you can take on two of RavenClans strongest cats?"Cancergaze leapted towards Goldendragon.
A good kill would be nice fo this boring day.
"I'll hang your skull in the nursery."She snickered evily.

[goldendragon]

"I think I can cause you are a lazy bit of skinny scraps of useless fur." She snapped vicously, her golden neck fur bristling.
"Also, my skull is staying on my neck covered with fur today." She leaped at Cancergaze with an angry yowl sounding through the trees. She raked her claws across the side of Cancergaze watching the blood stain her claws. She would need a good grooming after this. She bit down hard on the throat of Cancergaze but suddenly felt herself flung off by a larger force. She stared up into the light gray eyes of Talonstar and felt his talon-like claws sink into her golden pelt.
"You will not take me today you lazy peices of corw-food!" She yowled leaping at him and swatting an unsheathed paw at his eye. She watched him fall to the ground.

[~*|Dream♥Star|*~]

( 1. scourge never posted talonstar attacking u so please don't power play )


Cancergaze felt a sting, but turned back and snapped her long, silver fangs as she landed a hit in Goldendragon's cheek. Her claws swiped left and right as she snarled with rage.
"You think a meer kittypet can beat me! Well you're so in over your head! I'll have you thrown to the dogs! You're not even worth fresh kill, or crow food at the least!"She spat, circling Goldendragon.
Now this is why she was called Cancergaze. Her stare was enough to parylize any cat she could easily spit at. Her deep, yellow eyes dug deep into Goldendragon's as a smile came upon her lips.
"Sit down, you look sleepy."Her voice turned to a gentle melody as suddenly, instead of a rough she cat, a gorgeous tabby appeared.

[goldendragon]

(Sorry, I was trying to get 10 sentances =( )
Goldendragon felt her blood oozing our of a small gash on her golden cheek. She already felt exasperated and the battle had only begun. She knew she was fighting for her Clan, she had the right to send these fleabags back to the territory, whimpering like wounded kits. This was NIGHTclan territory and Cancergaze and Pebblestar were crow-food from RAVENclan. Then she heard the kittypet remark sound from Cancergaze's mouth. That was just despicable to say to a loyal and clan-born deputy. That made her eyes narrow into small slits on her golden tabby face.
"WHAT DID YOU CALL ME?!" She yowled, a blaze of cold fury burning in her eyes. She lunged hard tackling Cancergaze to the dust. She looked into the stare, it was cold and evil. She then pinned the cat down and bit hard onto the side of her face, she fastened her grip more, blood staining her fangs. She kept on sinking them into the right eye of Cancergaze harder and harder, the taste of the sticky blood was horrible, but if this was her last resort it would have to do.
"I will not sit down, you are crow-food and you belong in your territory." Stated Goldendragon through the tabby fur lining her teeth as she bit down.

[~*|Dream♥Star|*~]

Cancergaze shrieked in pain as her eye was ripped into. She flailed her hind legs and claws into Goldendragon enough to kick her away. Now she was angry.
"A kittypet scum just touched me!"She spat in disgust."First we'll go to our lord! He'll lead us through the war! Mark my words! I'll be wearing your skull at the end!"She hissed furiously, eyeing the gash in Goldendragon's belly.
Her toothy grin returned, despite her eye.
"All shall perish in the war of pain, for it shall be the Lord Nyroc's Rain!"She cackled as she took a step closer towards her victim.
She licked her lips at the fresh scent of blood and unshathed her claws.

[goldendragon]

"Your lord is a pathetic peice of fox-dung!" She yowled. She launched herself feircely at Cancergaze. She wished Soulstar would arrive to help her soon. She was getting tired and weary and running out of insults to throw back at the hostile cat. She raked her claws depply down the side of Cancergaze as she watched Cancergaze speak.
"And, For your information Lord Nyroc is only a mouse-briained rogue!" She spat. She watched Cancergaze unsheathe her claws and quickly leaped backwards. SHe narrowed her eyes.
"Why don't you just leave our territory, flea-bag?" And laughed, "Or have you forgotten which clan you belong to since you have been listening to that rogue, Lord Nyroc so much!" She bit down hard on the shoulder fur of Cancergaze and sunk her fangs in deeper and deeper.

[Soulstar]

Soulstar pounced on Cancergaze knocking her to ground. "Somebody hold her paws," Soulstar yelled,but it was too late Cancergaze kicked her off. She hit the wall pain. Her chest cover in blood from being shoved off. She felt the scraping of the rock on her like falling off the roof,and hitting a rock. She got up her on to three of her four feet. The fourth bedraggled leg was dragged along the ground. She jumped up making a blow for the jaw,but got hit in the face by a paw. She looked at the dripping from her cheek. Then she darted for the spinal area,and hit it with ease. Cancergaze fell to the ground.

[~*|Dream♥Star|*~]

1. never posted hitting u

2. u gotta gimme a chance

---post----

"I-I wouldn't s-say that if I were you."Cancergaze was struck with fear that Nyroc would appear at any moment, he'd waaste them all with one blow. She felt a hit in the middle of her spine and quickly fell to the ground. Blood dripped from her lips as everything blurred from the deputy's vision. Where had her leader gone? She knew he was mean and reckless, but did he really leave her to die?
"I died fighting."She grumbled to herself before passing out into nthingness altogether.
Would she now join Nyroc's wicked and mutated army?

[goldendragon]

Goldendragon heaved her golden side and opened her eyes. Her vision was blurred and it took a moment to clear her eyes. Her eyes were blurred from dust and blood filling them from when she landed on the ground. She pushed herself onto her legs and shivered a little as a cold wind whipped her and made her golden ears twitch in distaste. She flicked her tail and padded over to Soulstar's side. She looked down at Cancergaze beneath her.
"Is she dead?" Goldendragon asked as she stood beside her leader. Goldendragon prodded the limp side of the RavenClan deputy with her paw. The she-cat did not move, she was as limp as a ragdoll. She had no clue where Talonstar had gone, she lifted her head and studied the clearing. There was no sign of the tom, and his scent was completely stale. She flicked her golden tabby plume of a tail.